Somebody save me from
Utter insanity
Somebody take away
My worries for the night
Can't someone help me save
Myself from my intentions?
Just let me go
And somebody please
Save me from this depression
Author notes
Sort of like a proprioceptive write, but really not one, especially since it's semistructured and stuff.
What I did was this: I pulled my laptop screen down so I couldn't see the screen (leaving just enough room for my hands), closed my eyes, and whatever came out, came out. This is what came out.
The title is unrelated, simply expressing what I was doing while trying to think of a title.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love this that was a cool poem I can realte to this
Kind of a calgone take me away moment only intenisifed.
well done.
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