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Lilacs hide light of the earth

Digging clawing scratching for hope
None is evident
Deeper
Deeper
Maybe further down?

A tirade escapes this majestic chasm of light
As unfurls the streaming colors of uncovered regalia
Found it I have amongst this ruined place
Salvation wrought by the errors of jaded misfortune
Crystal clear sky as lilacs spring forth ominously from the dry earth
and uncovered layers of meshed rock cling to my feet and hands

Now is time to discover the unknown
Light beckons forth
I urge it on
I taunt it
Teasing
Inviting
Enticing

I lure it
Yet I feel lured unto its own blinding presence

All of life blooms around me
the lilacs sing its tune
No longer hidden
I have found
What this earth wished to cover

Lost integrity
Hope
Faith

A renewal of humanity and fire

But in an instant it is lost again
My hands feel powdery and weak
The dirt loosely crumbles from my frame
A reminder of the fruitless chase
Of the quagmire I must embrace
I am lost
Embedded

I crumble into soil
Into earth

No more light

I crave release

No fire to keep me warm

The lilacs have all but passed with the wind
So beautiful they were

Oh how I will miss them so

 

Shedding a tear for the wind

It was hidden by the lilacs all along

  

Author notes

this trippy ensemble was composed by TeChNoWC

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  • LadyLavender gold member
    October 5, 2007
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    humm, interesting write. Strongly visual, like the trippy affect adds an element of downward descend. This is what I found amazing most of all:

    Now is time to discover the unknown
    Light beckons forth
    I urge it on
    I taunt it
    Teasing
    Inviting
    Enticing

    I lure it
    Yet I feel lured unto its own blinding presence

    Good luck and thankyou for entering!


  • bird-mad girl
    September 8, 2007

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    That was very beautiful. And I do agree, it was trippy, but in a flowly, pretty way.
    I completely love all the words that you used, they were grand and so vivid. The combination of them was dazzling, stunning, lively.
    I also love the way you descirbed what you had, how the world became beautiful and full of live. Then I like the feeling of decay as that thing leaves and is no longer in your life.

    beau.ti.ful.