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The Start of Autumn (Haiku)

The Start of Autumn,
Tobacco flowers blossom
A Long Night Welcome

A contest entry

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  • NoWayJo
    September 22, 2007

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    Pretty, pretty image of the onset of Autumn which really stirs the senses, Michael. It's almost as to smell those tobacco flowers and see the glow of rustic lights from a plantation-home.

    Thank you so much for this wonderful entry to the contest...I really appreciate!

    Jo

    • Michael A
      September 23, 2007
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      thank you

      thanks for you kind words Jo, and for time and effort in hosting a contest. its a beautiful day in jersey today, hope you got outside some

      michael

  • star wars fanatic
    September 19, 2007

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    Very nicely written, with great word choice. I don't know that much aboy Eastern culture, though, so what is this talking about?


  • intanglio2ring
    September 7, 2007

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    Very Nice

    Yep!
    In the south the nights get cool - relief from the hot days!
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang