No one seems to understand how tightly you grip my heart
How your fingers seem to grasp my lungs and squeeze [[Instead of my hand]]
The very air is pushed from my chest
Oh, the feeling...It's just the Best
Each screaming [[jealous]] eye disregards my feelings
Brown eyes can turn green with envy, just looking [[At us]]
But we don't even regard the rest
Cuz you and me...We're just the Best
And no one seems to understand how this is more than a Crush
How each time I remember a kiss, a touch, a whisper
Goosebumps raise all over, Blush sweeps over me [[Violent red]]
Just like the first time...
But no one seems to understand
How we used to walk hand in hand
Not even the least bit distressed
I'm telling you,...It's just the best
Author notes
"And nobody understands its more than a crush"
Still a work in progress but it's what I've got...
A contest entry
- I Love Him, I Love Him Not......♥ Ends REALLY Soon...So Hurry In!! by xCandieKissesx.
450 points, ended September 10, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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Lovely poem, well put together. Good luck!
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This is a good poem for the quote. It suits it too. I like the first stanza very much. Great job! Good luck in the contest!!
Jackie ♥
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