As I lay down
In my bed
Thoughts of you
Roam in my head
Did I make
The right choice
By listening to God
And following His voice
I feel so lonely
In a crowded space
And all I can think of
Is your gorgeous face
I miss holding hands
And the secretive calls
And thinking that our love
Would never fall
You're irreplaceabole
But you, I can live without
I'll find someone new
Without a doubt
Author notes
This was written for a guy who confuses me so much, but I'm listening to God's voice
A contest entry
- I Love Him, I Love Him Not......♥ Ends REALLY Soon...So Hurry In!! by xCandieKissesx.
450 points, ended September 10, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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I love the ending, so full of hope, fantastic! Good luck!
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Hun, you should always listen to what God tells you because he is always right. Sometimes you just have to wait for that special someone no matter how much its killing you. Great job!! Good luck in the contest!
Jackie ♥ -
oh hun i am there n i've ignored gods voice n everyones advice for so long. i wanna kick myself haha props to you for staying strong. one day i'll be in your position. been there before but oh is it hard not to go back to whats so wrong for you.
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I'm loving all these new poems! Great work, and good luck!!
~Michaela~
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