Can’t change
colours of
emotion’s tide;
can learn
to surf.
In a list
A contest entry
- 10 words by Virgoan.
500 points, ended September 11, 2007, 47 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie Quest ~ Prewrite Party 2 by Namita.
300 points, ended October 6, 2007, 95 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
critical comments are most welcome.
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Love it.....
It is rare when I find such an interesting twist....and in a positive note.....I loved this one....ttfn Laurel
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Ohh. Yea. LOVE IT. Too good for 10 words.
Luv,
~Candy
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ohhhh I love it! I would never be able to do something like this in ten words! kick ass!!
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Thank you thank you!
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I swell so much with your words. Love the piece.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck
>>>VIRGOAN
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