Oh the dew spun God eye
gazes upon the calamity of its creation,
falls back to sleep
and declares that death is but a dream
where mankind dances
through the murky waters of hopefulness
and as the stars explode
and the cicada comes to understand
the beauty of its song,
a magician bows his head
and weeps inside his mortal bones
and his tears are immaculate
and his heart is an altar
where pain is sacrificed
because the holy wound can only be opened
and cleansed
without the presence
of an empire of dis-eased flies.
And while an angel
embraces a broken child
and the history of philosophical stones
is caressed
by the voices of the sensitive few,
the hands of the many gods and goddesses
light an incense
that only touches the senses
of perhaps a solitary white dove
who floats through the molecular mist
where spirits race formless
across a pasture
of pastelled deliverance.
Oh sadness is the ultimate breath
of the Universe,
the oceans cry upon shorelines
of lamenting sand,
birds moan their global dirge
and we call it beauty
as the trees slowly collapse beneath weapons
of jagged metal.
The sacred waters no longer
reflect the perfection of the moon
and the owl has been silenced,
its wild eyes staring toward a broken cradle
where metaphysical birth is cut away
from an umbilical cord
of shame.
Oh the dew spun God eye
gazes upon the calamity of its creation
and tries to once again bathe eternity
with a sorrowful
mercy.
A contest entry
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900 points, ended October 26, 2007, 45 entries
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Comments
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I saw the length of this and was not looking forward to reading it, but once I started I couldn't stop. It was beautiful, and it flowed like water.
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Your writing is beyond mysticism, and moves spirit like stone moves pond...ripple well, my friend..you really do!
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what thought provoking words. It leaves a "feeling" within this reader [sorrow and shame]. That third stanza especially....what have we done?
reenie


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where metaphysical birth is cut away
from an umbilical cord
of shame.
Very moving Marc. -


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