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a lot of sake

a lot of sake
served by pretty geisha girl
makes toes and hair curl

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  • star wars fanatic
    September 19, 2007

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    I've never had this drink. Is it alcoholic? Makes your hair curl? Wow, that's some strog stuff! lol Nicey written and good luck in the contest!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 13, 2007
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    Nice,

    I like this one, lol..
    Great job, and all the best to ya in the contest!
    Peace, and pen on poet!


  • intanglio2ring
    September 7, 2007
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    Yep!

    LOL!
    And so much else!
    Loved this take on Sake!
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • NoWayJo
    September 7, 2007
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    Really cool pivot-line in this haiku, Bill...Leaves the reader to wonder whether it be the sake or that geisha-girl curling those toes and the hair.

    Great haiku and still with all the Billbard humor I've come to enjoy of your writing. Thank you again for this entry to the contest!

    Jo