Why?
Do you not know what you have done?
I do.
So much pain, so little time.
Kill me? fine
Destroy me? ok
Rip me apart and put me on display? sure
That will never happen again.
Be my last, I beg of you be my last.
Why do we one day have to destroy ourselves?
"We really did our best, didn't we?
We were part of a mistaken love
But it wasn't a mistake"
Grasp on to you with my hands. Grasp on to you with my hands.
With my hands...
With my hands...
With my hands, I tried everything
I didn't want you to do this to me
Can we please meet in secret to discuss the future?
My hands aren't able to hold on (to you)
I tried, I tried
With my hands...
With my hands (grasp on!)
Be my last...
Be my last (I beg of you!)
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woo hikki, if it wasnt for her i wouldnt have this type of poetry. hope u like it
i tried to mix two emotions
I hate u, and, what went wrong?
i think i did a good job ^^
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I think this is fantastic....I adore the music and the piece is just amazing...
I think you have done more than just a good job...!!
Bravo...
smiles
Peace
Love it...
~A~
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very good ,very very good,i love the desperation"i tried i tried"
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This is so very beautiful yet very sad and I agree the music is very haunting to your words, this one is written with a deep soul filled with emotions and was very enjoyable to read the flow is great.
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Great job!
The melody playing was haunting and moving. What I got out of the words was “if we aren’t going to make it, go ahead and kill me so I wont have to go through this again”.
Good Work.
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Very well done. Bravo!This is what I have been dreaming of doing.
I hope to listen to more of your songs.
Thank you for sharing.
Fenny
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I just love the words of the title and the song is
lovely as well. Did you score it? Play the guitar in it?
Wonderfully done.
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oh and i love the song
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OMG Chris this is very beautiful and sad i think you did an awesome job of mixing the two emotions. I salute you i could never write anything like this cause i suck
but umm anyways nice job 
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