I loved you with all I could give,
and was happy for everyday I got to live
But I made one little mistake,
And you gave me a fist full of heartbreak
Iou didn't believe me even though
I told you I never wanted to hurt you so,
Please hear me out, take my oath,
It was meant for the good of us both
I stand before you once again,
Mind racing for a place to begin
because the hate you shoved at me,
All it did was made me see
You did your best to show your spite,
Crushing my heart with all your might
Explodeing into a shower of stars
Leaving bloodstained scars
But despite it all I'm on my knees,
Begging you to hear my pleas
Its amazing when someone breaks your heart,
how you can still love them with all the little pieces
Author notes
Based on the last lines Its amazing when someone breaks your heart, how you can still love them with all the little pieces
A contest entry
- I Love Him, I Love Him Not......♥ Ends REALLY Soon...So Hurry In!! by xCandieKissesx.
450 points, ended September 10, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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You took the quote and said it in so many different aspects of love. That is talent. Especially from a shorter quote. The imagery was great! Good luck in the contest!
Jackie ♥ -
Fab
Loved the 1st verse especially! Good luck!
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