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mu-shu pork

mu-shu pork for me
eaten with a knife and fork
not slick with chopstick

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  • star wars fanatic
    September 19, 2007

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    I agree. I like Chinese food, but chopsticks just don't do it for me. Call me un-cultured, but I think the concept is ridiculous anyway. lol What a great poem, though, good luck in the contest, and keep up the great work!


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    September 8, 2007
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    Great far-eastern haiku--especially appreciate the humor! Good luck in the contest!


  • intanglio2ring
    September 7, 2007
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    Yep!

    Gets my fingers in a knot too!
    Wonderful wording - Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • NoWayJo
    September 7, 2007
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    Well, you order up the mu-shu pork, I'll order up the   --(kanji for something spicy chicken but I forget just what), we'll drink plenty of sake and I'll teach you how to use those chopsticks, Bill! 

     

    In truth, I can't use chopsticks either, but I love the humor of your haiku.  Thank you so much for this entry to the contest!

     

    Jo