Souls levitating
into dusks beauty
reinvigorating senses
Embracing its splendor
while daylight fades
upon golden shores
Hearts emerging as one
flowing in unison
to tides breaking
Tapestries of light
dance on oceans
waves that crest
Filling me with love
and hope churning
my inner delights
Wonder and amazement
to the yearning
i feel inside
Giving of a yellow flower
amongst the fading light
Author notes
Thank you for hosting a Pre write contest
This is one of my favorite's
I wanted it to be filled with heart warming imagery
I hope you enjoy it as much as I do
A contest entry
- Simple Beauty by Danna Hobart.
300 points, ended October 14, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very lovely piece.
Such soft tenderness within the sunset, filling its splash with colors and dreams...
the yellow flower then, so innocent, in true love as she sets.
So pleased to see a beautiful bronze on this gem. Well done. ~Pamela
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This is lovely. I can see why it is one of your favorites. It is one of the best entries I have had so far. Thanks for entering.
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very nice sensual write, it was a pleasure to read you. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Beautiful imagery and the tone is awesome.
My favorite lines:
"tapestries of light
dance on oceans"
Thanks so much for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing fellow poet.
>>>VIRGOAN
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Oh Geeeeeeeeeeeeesh
Ok....I need to go back to comment school...
it did it again~
-shakes head-
sorry Tony
Girl Scouts honor~ I did not see the comment
take the first time...
and it did it again...
If You don't mind deleting one of the comments
that would be super
sorry
-hangs head down in shame-
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Oy!
For some reason...my first comment did not take and I sure did not want to do what I did before...
Send You a bajillion of the same comments
-so I just happened to have copied it-
Whew~
(here is what I originally said)
Holy Moly
Congratulations on Your HM
I have to say that when I read this piece~
What came to mind was You and Your other half for it felt like tapestries of light especially when You both allow Your quills to dance
Words reverberate off Your pages~
Love the golden shores...
can so see that in the mind's eye~
Thank You again for sharing Your Talent!
Always Appreciate Your comment on my work
Best wishes to You
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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OH My goodness This was splendid.
a wonderful mild sensual piece.
One of my favorites to date.
love you
Delila
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This is beautiful--especially the last two lines. A delightful poem full of vivid images with just a lingering sense of love. Congratulations on the trophy!
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Nicely and softly flowing poem my friend, very well done for the prompt. Best of luck to you in the contest...Scott
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eloquent words and sensual imagery for the prompt love and passion under the beauty of the amber and topaz skies ~ two hearts united as one forevermore xx well done and many blessings always xxx
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this is beautiful and you did a grand job with the picture. I wish you the very best in this contest.
Riftkin -
Beautiful write!!! Best of luck in the contest! You have such beautiful words and I enjoy the ending very much!!
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great take on the prompt.
best of luck to you in the contest.
enjoyable.
Tory -
Oh I love this
hearts emerging as one
flowing in unison
to tides breaking
tapestries of light
dance on oceans
waves that crest
Thank you for sharing and good luck to you in the contest.Best Wishes
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