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And with every second drips away a sip of life you'll never taste
  As forever creeps up on a worn, faded, old mind
The sky is bright with yesterdays, only yesterdays
  For tomorrow eats away the memories, erodes the feeling of it all

We won't stand still, we'll never stand still
  But eventually we will be stolen
As eternity closes us all away
  As timelessness finds us
We dis.app/e-a...r.....

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This was based on the song 'Time' by Pink Floyd.

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  • GiveMeTheGun
    September 8, 2007

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    nice

    hey girly, missed ya! good write, it was short and sweet, based on the legendary pink floyd, and written with great description! sounds like a party to me, i loved it. ^_^