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Invisible

I stand here,
   right in your view,
and you look right through me.

Is there something wrong,
   or can't you see me?

Don't you hear my voice
   calling out to you?

Are you ignoring me?
   Is there something I've done wrong?

I wave my hand in front of your face,
   desperate for attention,
and you go on pretending that
   I'm not standing here!

I become frustrated.
   Why are you acting like this?

Angry, I scream,
   and you don't notice a thing.

I try to strike your face -
   I am enraged now -
but my hand goes right through you.

Quickly, I pull my hand back,
   how did such a thing happen?
Full of shock, exasperated,
   I don't know how it was done.

Confused, I ask myself,
   "What had just occurred?
Am I not real,
   am I figment of your imagination?"

My head is reeling
   with my doubt,
and I'm angry that I'm invisible.

"No," I decide,
   "I must exist!
How else could I be here?"

That seems true,
   but I'm not sure,
and I begin to ponder.

I try again,
   and the same thing
happens once more.

"Hello!" I shout at you,
   "I am here, too!
I know that you can't see me.
   I know that you can't hear or feel,
but do you notice my emotion,
   my anger and my frustration?"

You do nothing -
   the same thing repeated over again.

"I'm not air,"
   I say to you, "I'm alive!"

Now the realization hits me,
   a lot like a sack of bricks.

"Oh, wait." I recollect thoughtfully,

   "I just remembered that. . .

I'm not."

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I like to bite.

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  • Powered by Tofu
    May 20, 2008

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    great poem, full of emotion, anticipation, and wonder.
    great write!
    haha, i like to bite. hmm, i don't taste good, really, my bloods bad, no iron...

    xoxo,
    --gooshawn <3


  • KillerRain
    December 13, 2007

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    Beautiful and sad. I can find nothing wrong with this write and if there was it fit in so perfectly that it did not stand out in my mind. The relization in the end after all that frustration.... Definitly good work with this. I can only give 2 applauses right now. but I'd give you more if I could. KillerRain


  • vampireblood
    October 21, 2007

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    I liked this, but I think you could have done something different with the last couple lines. It just didnt seem to fit to right with it, with your choice of words. Otherwise I did really like it. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you and thanks for entering my contest.
    ~Vampy~


  • WalkingBlindly
    September 9, 2007

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    I loved the poem and the emotions that i could feel as i read the poem but i think the end might have jerked it to an ending that doesn't quite flow..

    Still love it though!


  • crystallynnbradford
    September 7, 2007
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    very painful and a bit eery...I like it a lot

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