Hang in there
Try to be strong
The bad will all get better
It will not last for long
You aren't alone
Though you may feel you are
And someone who understands
Isn't all that far
I promise you that life
Isn't always quite as bad as it seems
You need time to find out who you are
And to follow all your dreams
You've got to make the best
Even of the worst
Life is not a movie
It goes un-rehearsed
Hang on through the bad times
Hang on through the pain
Learn to love what's great in life
Learn to love the rain
Someone knows just how you feel
You aren't the only one
Cherish all you have in life
Learn to have some fun
It's not worth giving up just yet
Though hopeless you may feel
You need to cope with all that's there
With everything that's real
You'll be okay, I promise
There's someone there for you
They make you laugh and make you smile
They help you to not be blue
A contest entry
- Help me help my best friend!!!! by Sara Bellem.
550 points, ended September 10, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful and sad. Her friends use to be her sunshine and now it seems like she has no light. Thank you for writing a fresh masterpiece and not a prewrite. I appreciate you entering my contest, I know it means a lot to my friend and I, God bless you :f
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hang in there...
Well written and contains a great message. Well done and good luck in the contest!
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This seemed like the last few lines shouldn't be the last. The 3rd to last line, would actually be a really good closer. I don't know how to change that around, but that one seems like the one you should have finish out the poem. All in all I think it's a nice poem. It's sincere. Oh and in the 7th line you missed the s in understand. Other than that pretty good.
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