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Stuck

Another day in this place
because you refuse to move on
you're stuck in this phase
surrender to this moment
emrace the new
embrace what is

I won't even pretend
that I understand this
just keep breathing
and no matter what you say
it won't change this
this is where we are today

moving on, letting go is hard than I ever imagined
please won't you let me know
where did this all begin?

open your eyes
even mememories fade
kiss it all good bye
you'll forget today
in a flash all you know is gone,
let it go
we all move on

no matter how much you scream
no matter you much you wish
no matter what we do
the world moves forward
life goes forward
this ride stops for no one

don't look to me
don't trust me
I'll hurt you
I can't carry your memories
I won't look to you
you'll only scar me too
move on

this is something I'll try not to forget
we walk different paths
the ending of one chapter
the beginning of two new
this is where we stand today

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you are my sunshine, my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are gray

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  • Celticmoon
    October 24, 2007
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    Thank you for taking the time enter and good luck to you!


  • nick.
    September 7, 2007
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    Very good

    This is very good.
    I like the first stanza a lot.


    • ixtli
      September 7, 2007
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      thanks

      Thank you...I've been going on a poem writing binge lately...plus I found a bunch of old poems that I'm putting on here. Lol.