I know I am not perfect but it seems to me
There is always one thing of which I can’t break free
How can I control the distance?
I wish I lived a timeless existence
Because maybe before the end of time
Somehow, someway I would find
The solution to this problem that never ends
And finally I’d be able to see you again
I am here and you are there
And nobody in the world seems to care
Why can’t life just be fair?
I want to look into your eyes and touch your hair
But I am here and you are there
It’s been days, it’s been weeks
Since I’ve laid a kiss on your pretty cheeks
All we can do is talk for hours
But the phone can’t give you flowers
I am here, where you are not
Maybe someday will be in the same spot
Will it ever end these feelings of distraught?
How many days alone will God allot?
‘Cuz I am here and you are there
I know I am not perfect but it seems to me
There is always one thing of which I can’t break free
Distance
Please tell me what you think
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SO sweet. Amazing!
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Oh wow.. Angel, this is positively gorgeous!
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thanks ;p
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I hope you two get together again.
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thanks!
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oh this is amazing I have tears oh my I can ralate to this so deeply what a beautiful writer and poet you are I cant praise this enough honestly its perfect but so sad. I feel this too very much.
take-care
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thank you so so much for you wonderful, encouraging comment!!
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Candy
It's good to read your poetry again. I liked how you just said stuff because that's how you feel, even if it is a little cliche. Like "Why can't life just be fair?" It's so true though. I liked it, a littlle like all your other poems, romantically angsty, but it was good.
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thanks!! romantically angsty, thats me!
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Nice
I'm pretty sure I know who you are talking about...and yea that sux doesnt it...i know what that feels like
the guy i absolutely want is not here at all, not even my state
but yea all there is to do wait and hope and see suk'ag yea
but i loved this poem it flowed well and definitly conveyed your emotions and troubled feelings abotu the situation
Hope all goes better for you Angel my guardian
~Desiree~
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thanks! and hes still gone no? patience is a virtue for many reasons. ;p
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yup. He is still gone, this time on deployment. Absence makes the heart grow fonder. That's all. TTYL Angel, my love.
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