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In the end truth be known

latest news
parents now suspects
how can this be?

so much hype
looking for someone
who abducted child

how often
trail to family
comes full circle

truth be known
in the end world mourns
for life of Maddie

A contest entry

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  • getsbetter
    October 8, 2007
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    Thank you Erica or writing a heartfelt poem and prayer for Maddy...GETS


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    October 7, 2007
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    I know in my heart that Maddy's parents have been falsly accused by the Portugal Police...their hearts are so painfully broken...these are my own thoughts, which bear no judgement on your poem...

    Your thoughts go out to Maddy, thank you for contributing your voice to this contest...

    ~Lilac~

  • Mickie27
    September 27, 2007

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    This is such a terrible saddening situation it is so hard to write a poem about everyone is quick to point the finger. How can we understand how the parents are feeling. This was a well written poem I could feel your emotion.


  • Megan Awesome
    September 7, 2007

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    Wow. This is so sad. And you should deffinately win the contest for this. I love it. Especially the end, there. Beautifully written.
    Megan


  • crystallynnbradford
    September 7, 2007
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    this is really sad

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