I hold my breath
your presence adds electric intensity to every moment
I'm scared to death
but I won't show it
I'm caught in the endless depth of your eyes
and I realize, I'm in too deep
I just can't look away
(part 2)
eyes locked
I can't move
I'm frozen here
I never go first
you've captured me with that look
the intensity burns on
but we've got to fuel this fire
so I toss in a smile
and my gaze has it's grip on you
and we stack our words
maybe now we're getting somewhere
Author notes
I wrote this about I guy I like (duh). Enjoy!
A contest entry
- Tell Me More ... by Asylaarix.
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Comments
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This was very beautiful ... I loved the way you worked your piece ... from part one to part two ... it showed that there was more that needed to be said than what was said to begin with ... you have done such a wonderful job with this ... I am absolutely impressed ... thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest ... much love 2 ya!
Chantelle
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