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i  woke up this morning
i    Spent    two hours in bed
staring at the ceiling
reflecting on how
sadistic
benevolent

devastating
enlightening
this year has been

"How did I lose myself?"
i put on my black suit
and then some Guy in the park said
"Hey, Mister Gloomy, what are you mourning?"
and I said
"A friend."

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  • Megan Awesome
    September 7, 2007

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    Wow. I like this ... alot. It's so sad and depressing. Yet, beautifully written. The end sent chills down my spine. I think that was my favorite part, the end. It really ties the whole poem together.
    Megan