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Another Simple Love Poem

some may laugh
and some may tease
but you're the only one for me

you make me smile
create a grin
and i don't care if it's a sin

i know we're young
at just fourteen
but you're the only one i see

and yes i've loved
and lost a few
but it lead me straight to you

my heart beat's mad
it goes insane
i know you'd never cause me pain

and if you leave
or go away
please come back within the day

i can't resist
or stray too far
i think it's just the way we are

and i can't wait
it takes too long
i don't think i can stay this strong

and just three words
are how i feel
i love you



 

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  • AshleySmashley
    September 27, 2007
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    :]] I love it!!!
    great poet you are..

  • patteringraindrops
    September 10, 2007

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    again hmmmm who on earth could this be about?
    lol
    i like this one even better sweetie its very very good

    it flows m-excellently
    and you can really feel the meaning behind it

    well done
    loves you
    memal xxxxxxxxx

  • PackWolf
    September 7, 2007
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    gd poem!

    thats reli gd
    love you
    beautiful