Am I invisibele?
Or am I just not important?
Does someone care about my feelings?
Does anyone know what is my meaning?
My meaning of life,
I am not too sure why I live,
I don't know why I carry on,
Why it's so hard for me to forgive.
Is my life just a dream?
Or am I just always being ignored?
Will I wake up or be thin air?
Can anybody see me out there?
My feeling are just thoughts that don't matter,
That is what everyone thinks,
Then why is it that when I am ignored
My heart begins to shatter.
Please tell me what you think
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aww thanks everyone..u probably wont believe me when i say this..but all your comments REALLY make me feel good...probably more than usual :S but yeah thanks anyway xx
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IM SORRY THAT YOU FEEL THIS WAY AND I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL AND I WISH I CAOULD HELP.....
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i honestly feel you!!!
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diana
thank you for your comments, i will try and write a few more poems that will be enjoyable to read xxx -
its really good
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a solid poem i think, not a poetic genious, i just read and write, but i think this is fair good, nothing spectacular,but a solid write, if its not too much to ask could you comment on mine because in new on here and want to know what others think of my work
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oops
sorry i accidently spelt invisible wrong sorryy
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