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My Gratitude~

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Tender mercies you all bestow,

Mending my heart of crackled stone

Word to line, each stanza does flow,

Uplifting burdens not your own.

Within your dedications know,

I felt the love you all have shown

Your love inside will always grow,

And now I see I'm not alone.

 

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Thanks for everyone who blessed my heart and soul!
Thanks Tory for holding a contest to uplift us all!
I appreciate you from the bottom of my poetic pen!

Love always, Timothy aka poeticweaver~

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    Well deserving of the gold would comment more but my Grandaughter wants to play soccor. Very very good.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 17, 2007
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    Just like you show such love and kindness you show such gratitude. We need to have more of both genders on AP..But you are a man on a mission, and we do appreciate you, and your smile...Keep it up, and we will try to be like you..Positive, loving and selfless....Wonderful!


  • penman gold member
    September 17, 2007
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    Excellent

    A pure incense of poetry beauty. Masterfully done and totally deserving of the gold.


  • guttermouth
    September 9, 2007

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    Tim, I've read several of your writes from time to time since I joined AP... I think this might be one of the best. Very sincere, great imagery, short, to the point, and clear. Very nicely done, good luck in the contest!


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 9, 2007

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    From my short time here
    I have observed it is you
    who show the "tender mercies,"
    the kind, encouraging words,
    evocative of a compassionate person.

    Aesthete


  • sunny day
    September 8, 2007

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    You will never be alone with a heart like yours. You share your love and soul with all through your words. You fill your writes with such passion and compassion. Don't ever let your pen run dry. We would be lost without your tenderness. This is absolutely beautiful and I thank you for sharing your gift with us. Best wishes in the contest. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • ellipsist
    September 8, 2007
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    I like this rhyme scheme

    the sounds all work well together... an uplifting message...


  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    So sweet! With a heart like yours, you never have to fear being alone again. You'll always have me, and I'm sure many more. And if you get anymore cracks just let me know, I'll be running to you with my glue! LOL.
    Sorry I had to do that!
    Just remember, when your feeling low that I'm always here. Ready to tell you I love you and I need you as much as you need me.
    Hugs & Kisses!!!
    Cayla


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    September 8, 2007
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    Aww thats so wonderful...
    smiles
    Peace dear brother
    ~A~


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    September 7, 2007

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    This was beautiful Tim,
    The lyrics the flow andthe pic
    were just something else.
    Slan Dolores x


  • Namita
    September 7, 2007

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    So beautiful and captivating. Wonderful job here!

    Luv,
    Candy


  • Crystal Ellens
    September 7, 2007
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    This one is beautiful. Has alot of heart and soul put in it you did a wonderful job on this


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 7, 2007

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    sweetheart know you've never been alone as you're in my thoughts and heart every minute of each day with everlasting love from me to you ~ as well as your many other friends too truly care for you as well. you are so well deserving of all the love and compassion bestowed upon you as you have a wondrous heart which you give freely from your golden heart. Love you with all my heart and more. You ARE my angel of my heart, my reason to be.


  • Mad Moon silver member
    September 7, 2007

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    My dearest Brother...this one has truly touched my soul, dear man! How beautifully penned with your heart's ink. Lemme grab another tissue.... Timothy, you will never be alone as long as I, and so may others, are alive!! Love you Brother-O-Mine!!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 7, 2007

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    wow this was amazing and beautiful
    i know we barely know eac other...but know i am always here if you ever need someone to talk to
    this was beautiful
    well done


  • Jalalbad gold member
    September 7, 2007
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    beautiful soul

    you will never be alone.
    Love,
    Judy


  • moon2u
    September 7, 2007
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    BEAUTIFUL


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 7, 2007

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    Aww my dear sweet soul.
    This indeed touched me. It is always my pleasure to reach the people i love and care for and wil lcontinue doing so for in the long run, none of us are alone, if we just remember to communicate we all here have already metnioned numerous times, we need to be there for one another.
    Thanks so much for this dedication.
    Love you as well.

    PassionsPromise


    • poeticweaver gold member
      September 11, 2007
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      Sweet Soul~

      You deserve a thousand poems, books of dedications for that matter, but there's only one way to say "I love you." (That's mean it!) So, I love you, adore you, and appreciate you so much in so many ways. Thanks for being a true blue friend. Much love, always!

      -Timothy aka poeticweaver

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