My thoughts
When they drift to you
Something happens
I cannot yet describe
It starts in the pit of my stomach
And gushes up to my heart
Tingling all the way up
Your voice
When I hear it
All other sounds
disappear
And I zero in on you
Every other sound dissolves
And all I hear are the words
Drip from your lips
Your touch
When I feel it
Ever so gently caress my arm
My heart skips a beat
And goosebumps show themselves
seemingly never to disappear
Your love
I can feel it all around me
Draping itself over my body
Keeping me safe and warm
Wishing, hoping, praying,
It's for eternity.
Author notes
Option 1- How i feel about the one I love.
I chose the option because it's easy for me to describe my feelings about someone...and those types of poems are always based on raw emotion.
Written for my one and only <3
In a list
A contest entry
- Love Me Till The End by Sorrow is the name.
400 points, ended January 8, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very Good
This Poem Went Really Well In This Contest
I liked how you described how your feelings are to that person
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So beautiful this one is Excellent write Dear
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This is beautiful. And romantic. Very nice job. Good luck.
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Its so good to be in love like this, you describe the Indescribable so well. Good luck!
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This is a love poem with deep feelings and the love just pours from the pen in this.
I loved it all for it truly speaks from the heart.
Riftkin -
This is 'sigh' inspiring! Wonderful depth of emotion you have written very well. Great job. Thank you for entering and good luck.
Jeannie -
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Thank you for the comment, it is much appreciated
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delicious
What a wonderful description of this early love!
"It starts in the pit of my stomach
And gushes up to my heart"
I enjoyed reading this, best of luck!
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Thank you again for the wonderful comment! By the way, I love the word choice 'delicious'
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