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Summer Wings Gone

I thought I grew wings
Last summer
But back at school
I’m the same
Shy
Awkward
Tentative
Scared
Girl I always was

The wings I thought I’d grown
The wings that might never have been
The wings that I’d hoped would help me soar past
Prejudice
Jerks
Fear
Are gone

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  • Dalawa
    September 18, 2007

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    Hey, I feel exactly the same way!!!! during the summer I felt all confident and stuff... But I'm never going to be as outgoing as I'd like. But at least I have you!!!


    • travis34dietC
      September 21, 2007
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      lol i'm glad to have you too, Nana!!!
      thanks for telling me you can relate. i was scared it wouldn't make any sense to anyone but me.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 7, 2007

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    Wow. That was amazing. I loved it. Isn't it sad how people can affect us, even to rip our wings from us?
    Beautiful poem.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~