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Maddy Dear

Dear sweet child, we pray for you
inside God's arms you wonder
with soft spoken angel's
of prayer, may they guide
you amongst the clouds,
into dreams of you coming home
dear sweet child, we pray for you
that your warm and safe,
Jesus is beside you
holding his flame of love,
please, dear Maddy,
know in your heart, we love you dear
and you touched the hearts of many
we cry with you,
a searching world that cares.

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  • getsbetter
    October 8, 2007

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    I must agree with all that Lilac has to say. And I too thank you for writing this poem and prayer...GETS


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    October 6, 2007
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    Such an endearing write, with thoughtfulness and sincerity, it would be lovely if one day Maddy could read this for herself...I love the hope that spills from your words...

    There is a correction needing to be made to her name though...Maddy is short for Madeleine, you have accidently written Mandy...

    Thank you for your caring support in this contest...
    ~Lilac~