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My Special Morning

Breathless at the touch of dawn.
Arms outstretched to reach the morn.
Russet leaves bathe in the sun.
Bask as Autumn has begun.

Mists of peace give way to love.
Opening blue sky above.
Slides away her silver shroud.
Sleeping now behind a cloud.

Golden rays dance to and fro.
Kissing dewdrops far below.
Making diamonds all around.
Smiling at her hallowed ground.

Sitting there I realise.
Nature is a great surprise.
Wrapped within life's spell I see.
All this beauty's here for me.

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  • AgoniesQueen
    September 7, 2007

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    I loved it! I could imagine sitting outside on a crisp autumn morning basking in the beauty of nature. I don't normally enjoy rhyming but this was tasteful. Good luck.