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If you are gone

How can we read your words
how can we learn
if your not here

How can you help
those that are you
if your gone

How can I draw upon
your wisdom of past
if there is no future

How can I love you
when under ground
with only a flower

How can I live
my sister
if you are gone

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  • Sara Bellem
    September 7, 2007
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    Wow, This made me tear up, we lost a best friend in high school from a car accident and I remember Kandi and I writing a poem like this on her grave, thats why it seems so tragic that she could possibly think of just slipping away Thank you for this write, it means so much to me that you entered God Bless you