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Lover's Kiss

If only ruby maple could sing
she would sing an orchestra of notes
that the birds would flock to learn
and couples would fall deeper in love
beneath the ruby maple, where diamonds
and dreams are designed, crisp fluttery
winds dance her leaves, into swirling
waltz's of romance, underneath her
warmfelt branches where lover's kiss.

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  • AgoniesQueen
    September 7, 2007

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    "She would sing an orchestra of notes
    That the birds would flock to lear
    And couples would fall deeper in love
    Beneath the ruby maple..."
    Were very powerful lines. I'm placing this on the finalists list.