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Gold-plated

Wait one moment dear,
where did I put them?

Oh I remember-
by the grey inglenook;
next to your gold-plated
china vase.

I left my thoughts
next to you
in hope I may join you,
and in faith that loneliness
cannot penetrate a bond
like ours.

So, we can look upon
our home together,
upon our children
and whisper guidance
Within the years of  my
forgotten memories.

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  • Jersene gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    This makes me think of an elderly person, seeking the memories of their youth, all alone, missing the way things use to be...yes, definitely a hint of sadness to this. Well written!