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[ There's no better day than today! ]

There's no better day than today!
How prett and sweet it all looks, may I say?
Who am I kidding now?
this is not me!

I cannot keep lying,
I cannot keep hiding!
To adults, to friends,
to myself and everyone.

I feel so bad,
and guilty,
there's nothing for me here
so why am I still here?

Just..want to die.
There's nothing here.
Just fading away.
I need to...

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I needed to put feelings down...

Idk?

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  • WhiteAngelCake
    March 26, 2008

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    Cool. I'm not sure why you want to die, but I don't think there is anything that could be that bad. Well... Maybe a few things. But a lot of people wanna die over something very small. Whatever it is, get better!


  • KateMadness
    September 8, 2007

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    O_o

    Kat...
    You need some anti-depressants.
    Kidding...but I love your poem. Though I can't understand how or why I love it. :/