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your also what makes me frown

I said your what makes me smile
but your also what makes me frown
all of the things really start to pile
but if you were to stop and care the feeling may go down.

I gave you my heart before
but you just pushed it away
I thought i didnt love you anymore
but now I know that love never changed.

I'm not going to let you break it this time around
so i'm going to end it right now
my emotions wont be found
then again most people just dont know how.

People say that they love me
but they're just killing me a little inside
they think that what i have is free
but when they're not looking is when i"m going to hide.

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  • Lyrical Noob
    July 22, 2009

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    I think.. This is really good and flows perfect My favorite part was the second stanza Awesome write
    thank you so much for entering my contest and Good luck

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