Within your eyes, I become distant and serene,
Beauty reflecting your inner soul,
A feeling of peace spills over me.
Your heart shining like the rays of the sunset,
Yet mystery lays on the horizon,
As we seek comfort in our minds tomb.
Breathtaking, your view so lovely,
Enticing the passion within,
I reach out to paradise, I touch you.
Inhaling the sweetness of the garden,
Life is beautiful in Heaven.
Walking the pathways of eternity, I am free.
Troublesome woes, no longer defeat the woman I am,
Strength had bounded from Paradise,
Capturing the insecurities, and erasing past sorrows.
Can’t you smell the essence of our love?
The scent is riveting my friend, please come,
Cast your fears away, in the river of cleanliness.
And let ourselves delve into, the promises of peace,
We shall gather at the rivers bed,
Release all that we are, crossing over to Heaven.
Author notes
PIC Inspired contest
Love you Scott
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest by R-Evolve.
1500 points, ended September 11, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Outstanding description of the place that is inspired by the picture. This had such a beautiful flow and just took me away. Congratulations on the Bronze.
Soulful Woman
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Nice,
Sharing a piece of that lovely heart and soul, no wonder why your poetry is so precious, and pulls upon my heart-strings so much. Because all these loving words are so special you write..Because they're yours!
I love you too Scott.. LOL..
Sorry, I just had too! The devil made me do it. 
Much love, me.
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Beautiful soft flowing write dearest, I do love your style. You are a definite joy to read and know. Love you baby.
Scott
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wow this was awsome
it was very sweet and heartfelt with deep emotions
happy poem
it made me smile and think
i really loved it well done
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I like this, very sweet... You should add some more imagery and bulk it up, ready for the ending. I love your style, it makes me feel sheer anticipation to see what you will write next.
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