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Intermittent



the zing
  in heart strings
is all too often...

      intermittent


A contest entry

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  • Virgoan
    September 10, 2007

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    Love the usage of contemporary words and the flow is beautiful!

    Thanks for sharing and best of luck

    >>>VIRGOAN


  • intanglio2ring
    September 7, 2007

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    Yep!

    And it needs to rain here soon!
    Wonderful entry - Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang

    ps Looks like you've found an excellent ride!


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 7, 2007

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    Ahhhhh now here is something I haven't seen in a while and have missed, the genius of the golden pen of you.... fabulous that you can write so much with so few words, magical and delicious... good luck in the contest

    Karen


  • A2b4u
    September 7, 2007

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    Very good.

    Brilliant use of 10 words - a thought conveyed most succinctly.
    Well done. I hope you do well.