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This Love I Have for You



Why can’t I explain,
Why can’t I tell you?
I just want you to feel,
Feel what I feel
See what I see
Beyond the constraints of life, distance and time
So far, yet so close to my heart you are,
My dear.

I love you with such a purity of being,
If I have wronged you at all forgive me please;
My intention was only to show you more,
More of what I feel,
More of what I can give, to you,
Not by myself,
But through this love I have for you,
Through God I am exemplified,
Through the essence of love itself,
That is what I shall become.

Laugh for me,
So that I may be filled with the joys of my love for you,
Smile,
And let my heart soar into the heavens,
Let your arms close around me,
And I will show you a tenderness that emanates,
Only from this love,
This love I have for you.

Let me hear your voice,
My dear,
Let me feel your breath,
They comfort my wearied soul,
They sing a tune of hope,
Of love,
Of sheer reflection of God’s goodness,
His majestic hand,
Purity.

While you cry,
I come to wipe your tears,
While you feel low,
My voice beckons to whisper in your ear,
To remind you of just how I adore you,
To remind you who is standing by your side,
Standing, always, protecting,
Forever.

I have been waiting for you,
For what seems an age now;
Although my life is just beginning,
It was always being pulled,
Pulled towards something,
Somewhere;
Just a small hint of what it was,
I found it and it’s you.

Rest your head on my shoulder,
My dear,
Run with me, dance with me,
Laugh with me, Cry with me,
Talk with me, breathe with me,
Lay with me, Wake with me,
Live with me, love with me,
Be with me.
Look into my eyes and see this love I have for you,
A love so strong, so bold.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 9, 2007
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    Loved it, good luck


  • xCandieKissesx
    September 8, 2007
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    This is so cute. I love the uses of vocabulary and the flow that made it all adorable. Great job!! Good luck in the contest!!
    Jackie ♥

  • maggy1126
    September 7, 2007

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    wow... its so cute....I love it, it made me want to fall in love... great job....
    Beyond the constraints of life, distance and time
    So far, yet so close to my heart you are,


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 7, 2007

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    Not my sort of thing

    Sorry, I don't understand poems without rhyme and rhythm, and I won't content on any content witha religious side as I can't so so without offending, I always try to "return the favour" but won't work here.


  • Cyprien
    September 7, 2007

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    If this isn't a pure definition of what I'm feeling now, then I must lack understanding of the word itself. This just might be what I was looking for. These words are how I feel right now. Thank for entering and best wishes in the contest!

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