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Like Milk and Honey

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You and I in ecstasy,
in love that knows no boundary.
We flow like milk and honey.

Like river rain, you move me.
Like swans, together, floating free,
you and I in ecstasy,

tendrils tangling tenderly,
like strings that weave a symphony.
We flow like milk and honey,

like sails when skies are sunny
o'er golden beams on summer sea,
you and I in ecstasy.

As Eros, Aphrodite:
We move as wind through willow tree,
we flow like milk and honey,

like nectar from the lily.
Reality is fantasy--
you and I in ecstasy!
We flow like milk and honey.

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  • gypsyfish
    September 7, 2007
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    good write! good write!!

    good writing. i feel the same way about the person i'm with. love gypsyfish

  • xxAshleyNicolexx
    September 7, 2007
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    great write! keep up the good work, comment mine ?