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Lose and Gain

The world is always about lose and gain,
you win some you loose some.

I gained a new group of friends,
I lost my best friend.

I gained a ex boyfriend,
lost a peice of my heart.

I gained some more weight,
I lose some self esteem.

I gained another A on a task,
I lost another Well Done.

I gained beautiful siblings,
I lost my parents interest.

I gained a bitching and backstabbing friend,
I lost my trust in anyone.

I gained a paraniod life,
I lost a normal one.

Tell me anything you think

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  • Yemassee gold member
    July 19

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    Well most positive things also have a negative one. Example, if someone finds something, that means someone lost something. That just seems to be the way it is. I like that you thought of that.

  • Francis Vincent
    September 28, 2007

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    very good

    an issue that needs attention
    i like the way you used a gain / loss theme
    it's true
    with each pain caused by emotional abuse of others
    we lose part of ourselves
    from their selfish actions and bull