Nothing matters anymore
I've turned away and locked the door,
I've turned the key and closed my eyes
Let spill the tears and stop the lies.
I want no more to do with this place
I want to leave without a trace;
To pack my bags and disappear
To have no regret to have no fear.
To abandon all my life long dreams
To stop the silent nightmare screams.
To leave behind this pain and despair
To move on with existence without a care.
If only this could all be true,
To go away and start anew
But I must live with these tears and lies
So I'll lock the door and close my eyes.
Please tell me what you think
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this had a good beat to it, and it flowed well while getting the main point across, but I feel like you could really do even more with it by going outside of those words that we are so accustomed to [like lies/tears/eyes etc.]
thank you for entering
and maybe if you felt up to it you could keep this poem and then for your own delight, write another on almost the same exact thing focusing on a broader vocab, and less emphasis on the rhyme and then compare the two.
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Great flow to and feeling to this poem, I enjoyed reading!
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LOVE IT.... THIS IS SOO. WORDS CAN'T DESRIBE IT.
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It is painted with words
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i love this
its amazing, i can picture this happening
Great job
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