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School
is so free
science
is freaky
Science is really hard
but i can do good
all i gotta do is study
and then i can say i knew i could!
Social Studies
is a snooze
but my teacher is awesome
my football team never loses!
Gym
is so fun
i ran 10 laps
as soon as i knew it, it was done
Math
isnt so bad
it can be confusing
but my teacher can make me mad
Lunch
is my social hour
well everyone's in fact
every second of it, it gets louder and louder
English
makes me mad
I need to get a good grade on homework
so i dont do bad
Choir
is da best!
Even though i started it two days ago
its the subject all day i do the best!
Band
can be fun
my clarinet is so messed up
for christmas im getting a new one!
Well this is what i do all day
Going up and down 6 flight of stairs
i could complain all day long
but i doubt anyone cares

Does everything make sense? Tell me where or wrong.... I know i talk IM Ignore that!

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  • OnyxtheForsaken
    September 7, 2007

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    It made sense don't worry! Hmm... it's a really unique style you've used here! My only little snag would be that a couple of words repeat during the reading, but I wouldn't worry too much, I repeat myself all the time!

    Great piece! Keep up the good work!