While glancing thru these pages
I came upon this ad.
I had just awakened
amazed by what was said.
"I'D LIKE TO FIND A HUSBAND"
Someone that'll treat me RIGHT!
Someone to stand beside me
who's loyal and forthright!
I 'd like,-
him to be religious
If possible,-
worldly and wise.
I thought
about my options,
My goodness!
WHAT A SUPRISE!
Not looking for a woman
but always for a friend.
I could meet someone new,
a friendship
could begin!
Marriage,
I'm not sure of.
But,
it could be fun,
GONING OUT
TO THE BEACH
and
laying in the sun.
Going out to dinner
sharing lots of thoughts.
SHARING all our problems,
"And sharing of our HEARTS!"
So here's my proposal:
LOVE, WILL YOU MARRY ME!
Thou
I am only a humble man.
Much fun
I'm sure well see.
Long talks
will bring us closer,
a merging of our hearts,
thou not of our bodies,
BUT SURELY
OF OUR THOUGHTS!
Author notes
I was looking for something of interest and I SURE FOUND IT! Hope you like this entry my friend.
A contest entry
- AP Husband wanted by Janice M Pickett.
1200 points, ended September 24, 2007, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congrats on the silver trophy! Hope you found yourself an AP wife! Families on here are always interesting.
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A sweet poem without any promises, but of hopes for a find friendship and a little romance. Well done and a pleasant read.
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Warm and smooth
A very nice smooth flowing rhymer that any gal would love to read. I wish you the best my friend.. now slide over for I am about to enter.
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great write! keep up the good work, comment mine ?
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Thank you for your comment.
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Wonderful sweet and who could turn down such a beautiful invitation...omg! I just did hoping you the best love, sure looks like a winner to me
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That's the problem with being a romantic! YOU CAN'T HAVE BUT 1 WIFE. Too bad.
Love you ANN.
"BOO"
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AWW! Long talks, the beach, and the sharing of hearts. What woman could resist? Good luck in the contest.
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You know I like challenges and this was of interest to me, I hope it is of good quality and flow even thou I shanged the flow a couple of times to accomadate the words and thought. Thanks heygoo my friend.
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