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Seeking An Apology










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Tear to stain,
papered passion

as ink trails,
'forgive me'

~









A contest entry

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  • ellipsist
    September 12, 2007

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    quite well done...

    love the brevity of this... speaks very loudly, very clearly in this short piece... I love the way that it works with the title...

  • Virgoan
    September 10, 2007

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    Wow! Love the brevity of this one.

    Powerful!

    Thanks for sharing and best of luck

    >>>VIRGOAN


  • heygoo
    September 7, 2007

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    Simplistic in wording yet so full of emotion, meaning, and stunning visuals. This was a beautiful write. And the title is just perfect for it. Nice job.


  • Namita
    September 7, 2007

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    Wonderful 10 word penned... beautiful write. Great job and good luck in the contest.

    Candy