Leading one to another
You lead me in
Haunting one mind at a time
I can't even think
Something as ethereal as air
You haunt the darkest shadows
Walking through the fields of myself
And conversing with those lost to time
I hear a whisper of madness
An urge to listen
Haunting one mind at a time
I can't even think
My mind absorbed with your words
I feel the pulses of dark desire rushing through my head
Something as ethereal as air
You haunt the darkest shadows
Creeping in the black portions of my sanity
You're all I have left
Leading one to another
I feel your touch in my sleep
Your voice talks to me in my dreams
Our bodies touch in my fantasies
And at last
I see you as dark as night
I feel you soft as a cloud
You have me as easy as breathing
Your voice speaks madness
Your voice speaks madness
But I can't help to give in
And for once in my life feel complete
A contest entry
- Inspire ME by Death by Fire.
300 points, ended September 8, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow. Beautiful, I love the word choice in this. Definitely deserving of gold and a pleasure to read!
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I can see why you won gold. It's a very well penned piece.
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A-MAZING
This was so beautiful and hypnotizing. It grabbed me with the first word. I am enthralled by the emotion in this! Awesome job, Jane
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Kind of lyrical in a way with the repetition of those lines - congrats on winning gold in this contest.
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I loved the longing in this piece and the completeness at the end. Nicely done
Ruth -
Wow
This is really good:-) Thanks for sharing with us!!
The first lines are somewhat awkward but the last line is great. -
Very good! It's really pretty/
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Leading one to another
I feel your touch in my sleep
Your voice talks to me in my dreams
Our bodies touch in my fantasies
now that is what I call a great dream
nice to be able to read it
RIftkin -
good
i love the ending
its really pretty
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