Blessed Be
Within prayers above
Lest not we see
Sin found with love
Alas tender kisses
Crass and Laden wishes
Blessed Be
Be Blessed
Above prayers within
See we not, Lest
Love with, found sin
Kisses tender alas
Wishes Laden and crass
Be Blessed
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Palindrome Poetry
Also Known as Mirrored Poetry
A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same forward or backward. It stems from the Greek word palindromos: palin, meaning again, and dromos, meaning a running. Combining the two together, the Greek meaning gives us, running back again...
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Absolutely gorgeous!
Very beautifully done Bear!
You come up with such fantastic ways of impressing me!
U amaze me everytime!
Well done, I hope to see some more uplifting stuff from you!
Keep up the fantastic writes Bear! Ur soo talented!
♥ From the bottom of my heart
Your aussie Girl Dani
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hmmm... I dabbled in palindromes a couple years ago... my didn't turn out as eloquently as this one did... I liked it! beautifully said!
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Yay!
I just wrote one of these recently...
I love this style, yet it is so time consuming and difficult, I can but collect well mirrored lines and wait to put them together.
Some areas...well actually only one spot...
Was a little bit of trip up, but with the difficulty that surrounds this sort of poem It is no big deal...the line that I had a problem with was...
"See we not, Lest
Love with, found sin"
this one reversed was a lil stumble...but you did a great job...
I love to see your various poems...all of them are so beautifully penned...
Thank you also for telling me of shadowpoetry.com, it really becomes useful when I want to write something new and different, or when I cannot write anything, but want to...gives a challenge to spark some inspiration...
Peace and love...
Take care,
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Wonderful
I love this. Very very beautiful indeed. Wonderful writing here.
All the best
Wayne
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This is great love! The Palindrome is so simple yet so difficult to write. You did it perfectly, this piece reads just as well frontwards as it does backwards. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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A very simple prayer that is quite the inspirational work. I always loved the words; "blessed be". Your form is excellent! I have tried this form once or twice and you make it appear smooth and easy and I know it is not. Very calming words pressed here beautiful lady.
Sorry it took so long to get here. I had two contest to judge, and there are some really critical family issues going on in my life right now.
Loved this!
Always ♥
Renee
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My Dear This was a beautifulpoem
you put words into someone heart and you made them feel the words your wrote. Not many can do that. You have class and you have a heart and most of all you are bless by God and I will also bless you too.
Your freind
Morningstar
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