Kiss my skies
with your gentle glances.
Fade my shade of indigo
in pastel petals
of gentle gestures
to bloom my eyes
with beautiful reasons
to dance away the blues
with a fickle feeling
that sneaks in
and flutters into
a thing called love....
♥♥
Author notes
I am poet2angels
your prompt is...
"There is nothing more dreadful than imagination without taste." Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
A contest entry
- Different Kind Of Contest For Me by Amorous Arms.
475 points, ended September 14, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like this
you did well here in this write..mac
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This piece is just oozing with radiance! So very well written, your imagery and expression seek the inner depths of your readers. Loved this one!!!
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Wow~ Beautiful just beautiful Lynda... an awesome piece. Love this...
~Candy
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Wow.
This was so beautiful. I simply loved this. Such brilliant expressions. Oh, I just loved everything!
What can I say- this was soft, gentle and so perfect
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Do I need to say more?
Excellent wordings
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Wow,
A true poetess I surely see,
words flutter like the butterfly freely
You caress soft senses within me,
as you weave entwined tenderly!
Thanks for sharing you
Much love, Timothy, aka poeticweaver~ xo
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I have to agree the love expressed/hoped for is sweet. The alterationjs add to the sing songie presention while reading it. Lovedd the images you used to discribe love
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Awwww so beautifuland oh so sweet my dear friend!!! Love your take off the prompt you were given!!!
Loved this!!! As always... outstanding!!!
I wish you the best in the contest!
Jazzy
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aww
its so sweet! i love your take on the prompt! it was wonderful!!! thank you soo much for entering!! and best wishes.
~Alex -
your prompt is...
"There is nothing more dreadful than imagination without taste." Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
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