Tell me it isn’t so~
I heard what she said, about me!
You know me all to well
To think I would ever be…
That kind of a person
That would do, what she has said
They all lie and make up stories
It is all in their stupid heads
Now everyone will think
That what she said, is true
Because he likes me better
Doesn’t give them the right to do
Author notes
jasminerose
Prompt: High school drama
In or out of high school, there are always those few that feel the need to hurt others..
A contest entry
- Different Kind Of Contest For Me by Amorous Arms.
475 points, ended September 14, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Outstanding
Jealousy, make believe, broken friendhips, all the ingredients of high school drama. This poem took me back. I liked the simplicity and the way you told a story in only three stanzas. Best of luck in the contest.
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Excellent!! Love what you did with the prompt...
~Candy
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Very interesting and it reminds me about this special time of high school and after. Always somebody knows some things better about somebody... short and good written, with the right essence.
~Sonja~
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rumours...
awful things...
they hurt so bad, not just one person but so many, they ruin friendships, many friendships...
school... bitching... all an awful part of life...
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nice. i loved it. very much about high school drama. so much of that really does happen in school. thanks so much for your entry!!! best of luck!
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Thank you FrenchyToYou for hosting this fun and different kind of quickie And thank you for the wonderful comment
Jasminerose
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oh wow does this bring back some memories..
Great take on the prompt, my dearest....
As always, flawless rhyme and flow...
Excellent!
Lynda
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Thank you Lynda for such a sweet compliment on my poem It brought back some for me too
lol
Jazzy
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sounds like high school drama to me! good luck in the contest
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Thank you !
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your prompt is...
high school drama. -
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Hi FrenchyTo You! Thank you for my prompt! One question.. any limits on words or sentences?
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no not at all. let the prompt take control =]
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Coolbeans! Thanx
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