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Laziness

Nascent body of light:
fall asleep my shadow
In this scenery...habit of resting
Found strange in this floor
With track of my name.

Occupy the root of wandering dwellings
in the mirror of
my minimum charge
hide even in hoisted eyes, 

Stay in illuminated twilight,
Bank of the cancelled time,
Naked and free to be.

Author notes

Jules

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  • pozo
    December 22, 2007
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    Good imagery here. Congrats on the bronze.
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Nature Song silver member
    September 6, 2007

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    Well before I read this please go back and view the rules, your missing something in the author's notes!

    Sie