I play a song
That spoke to me
A fragile melody
The devastation
And it’s will of
Preservation
It’s feeling of
Delectation
Is my inspiration
For this…
A tragic Rhapsody…
Our eyes can not meet
For this emotion weighs
Down my spheres
Sorrows of this world
Given to me
To play and draw out
Tears…
I exist
With Lute,
And Forlorn
Beauty
But we are both
Broken
The music flows
On the air between
But it’s sad lament
Flakes my wings
Listen to the
Quiet… discordant notes
Unbalanced dilation
Set off by these vibrations.
If you could hear this pain
Would you feel it?
Author notes
I heart that picture!
**pic: These Broken Things by metalblackfae at DeviantArt.com
In a list
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired! by SpydurPoet.
675 points, ended September 9, 2007, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow. That was absolutely amazing. I especially loved those last two lines. You did an excellent job painting the picture. Thanks for entering the contest!
Write on!
~*~SP~*~
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very nice, an awesome pic and the poem suits it very well. a sad story and yet so loveble.
thanks for shareing
keep it up
emeraldsoldier
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awesome
i thought this was really good, i liked it alot... it really made me think, my fav line was
If you could hear this pain
Would you feel it?
simple yet complex good job
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I just loved this..It had such a dark feel to it yet it was full of passion. The picture was not an easy picture to write for but you did a wonderful job. Great work.
Soulful Woman
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i like the way it flows a lot...i think that is a super hard picture to write about
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Beautiful and the title is great for grabbing interest quickly- then the poem locks in the that interest. Well done!
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