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Tell Me

Tell me,
as you burn
forever in hell
as you scream
with no one to care
tell me
can you feel
what i feel
for ever inside
in my dreams
your nightmares reside
remembering what it is
that monster survives
tho you will die
i will for ever keep you in mind

Author notes

This I wrote when I was angry I wrote it for all the bastards who love to hurt others

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  • screamin2u
    September 14, 2007
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    Cool write. Good luck in the contest!