Looking up at you in the moonlight
Its beam seeming to shine on us alone
I reach up to kiss your tender lips
As you whisper this into my ear
I will always love you, forever and ever, I'm yours
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10/40 by penman.
525 points, ended September 6, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - pif - Enter your best quickie pre-write by tara wilson.
1200 points, ended September 20, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - IF YOU WANT EASY POINTS AND A SHINY TROPHY... by lexie like woah.
675 points, ended September 14, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In need of a girls written love by daruvial.
300 points, ended October 26, 2007, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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very nice
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Beautiful - so hard is this for many to say, sometimes the right 'setting', imagery helps things along...lol...thanks for your entry
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aww, sweet, simple, and short.. i like it. very nice. thanks for entering and goodluck
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You have been busy writing and entering contests since you joined, congratulations on all those trophies already. Liked this poem of yours - the sentiments you have expressed so well in these lines - easy to read and understand; heartfelt and sincere too.
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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A heavenly song. Lovely words. ~Pamela
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Wow so sweet and full of love, and so romantic I loved it. This piece touched my heart. good luck LISA
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