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The Germ of New Life





Listen,

I wanted to write new poetry,

find different ways to say

the same thing I have said

a thousand times.

I wanted to find a way

to make you feel the wind,

or cool water from a brook

between your toes;

find a way to make you hear

the music

from just the proper placement

of nouns and verbs.

I needed a way for you

to see through my eyes

the world I have seen,

the beauty of tears,

the germ of new life

held in a woman's smile.

But, really,

how many words are there,

and which of them would work

to describe the now of me,

my love, my glassy-eyed wonder

at this world?

How many ways

can a man, enamored,

tell his love

that she is more important

than his next breath,

when, really,

only the emotion

will matter to her?

We will find infinite ways

to touch without vocabulary

and my poetry is obsolete

when I hold you.




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  • MuddyKing
    September 22, 2007

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    Scott you are a master of closing a poem
    you always have this way of holding our attention throughout and then Bam us in the end.
    But, I have always thought your versality is what I admire most...you knocked me over with a middle ages write...I'm sure you won gold with it
    and your write in Rob's monster was my fave of that contest.
    And then there's Emily...nuff said
    amazing as always

    contender
    Peace Muddy


  • Saffron gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    You are poetry, don't you know that?

    I waited so long to comment on this because I was catching my breath--this is lovely and real and so dear to me. I am the one left without words (once again) to tell you how I feel about your poetry, except that I love this.


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    "We will find infinite ways
    to touch without vocabulary
    and my poetry is obsolete
    when I hold you."

    Dammmnnn. Scott, I've been reading your work for over 3 years now, through all of its evolutions, all its twists & turns. I have always admired your phrasing, your depth, your humor, your introspection...Still, there are moments in a Poet's life when language becomes completely useless. There are no words ~ no language ~ good enough to describe the love shining in your eyes. But I swear, the electricity between you two is enough to power the West Coast on a hot, humid day. Maybe I oughta throw in Vegas, too. Sheeeeeesh. Good luck in Richard's contest. I agree with you, Scribe; it's honor enough just to be on his favorites list. He keeps some damned fine company. Wanda


  • Nicolette gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    I love the metaphor or theme you've applied here...and you always write love so beautifully. Love is its own language... Wonderful poetry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Annalise
    September 7, 2007

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    As if I didn't have enough competition here, you had to show up.

    Man, I wish ya'll would feel sorry for me and let me win a trophy or two.

    Love it.


  • poet girl
    September 7, 2007

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    "My poetry is obsolete when I hold you," wow, as good as your poetry is that is a very huge compiment to your love of this woman. That is such a wonderful write and very different. Impressive, pen on.

  • Suzanne Dia
    September 7, 2007
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    Beautiful.


  • drama1000 silver member
    September 7, 2007
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    Thrusts head forward, widens eyes, drops mouth...

    That's all.

    Charisse

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    September 6, 2007
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    Oh sure, you just had to go and enter too.


    • S A Adelmann
      September 7, 2007
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      Between you and the rest of the competition, I don't expect to win. But thanks. I just had to enter - it is an honor just to be on Muddy's list.

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